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mini fighters

on: February 16, 2009, 06:22:46 am
hadn't pixeled in a while so i did these for fun; ill probably do more later. All critiques are welcome.


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Re: mini fighters

Reply #1 on: February 16, 2009, 07:57:00 am
We had a deal, $20 for your art talent that you're not going to use and you come up with this shit. Your a sly one.
might be style preference but it seems you could make them a bit more contrasty, although even now they still read very well.
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Re: mini fighters

Reply #2 on: February 16, 2009, 08:15:01 am
I think the contrast is fine.  I can still tell volumes, but the way it's done now gives it a very subtle feel to it.

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Re: mini fighters

Reply #3 on: February 16, 2009, 08:38:44 am
I just don't like the right guys far foot.
Looks like he's falling over on that foot or something.

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Re: mini fighters

Reply #4 on: February 16, 2009, 08:43:15 am
Damn, these are nice. I second the foot gripe, also the right guy's far arm seems to be in a weird sort of semi-twisted pose. Feels like the humerus should be slightly longer, possibly. The hand I think is what gives it the twisted impression, though.

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Re: mini fighters

Reply #5 on: February 16, 2009, 04:41:36 pm
thanks for all the feedback, i think i addressed all the critiques
« Last Edit: February 16, 2009, 06:52:03 pm by JWW »