[WIP] Mining game

[Oltar]

Character done for a mining game, soon I will post some animations of the character.
Crits are welcome.


Update.




Final.

[EyeCraft]

Hey, cool character design. Though if I understand it correctly, he's on two wheels? Seems to me like he'd fall over.

I did an edit:



Try to make it look more metalic by adding sudden/bright speculars and ambient light popping up in the shadows. Also there's a number of colours in the palette which are unnecessary, such as having 2 ambers, the olive, the almost-black grey, etc. You could chop down a bunch of colours, really. I played with a few of the colours mentioned.

[Oltar]

Thank you for the edit.
He´s not on wheels, there are the foot.
It´s supose to be a man in a suit. The green is not a metal, it´s a cloth, the parts of metal are the eye, the mouth, the belt, and the hands.

Retouched some pixels (thanks again eyecraft).

[Oltar]

I animated the smoke.

[Quake]

I'd suggest to put the smoke actually on the sprite..

anyway, i did an edit.. got rid of like 3 colours i didn't think were needed..

also changed some other stuff.. including making it cleaner..

[Mathias]

Eyecraft's ditherless edit is a huge improvement. You gotta be careful with that dithering, it adds texture, not just gradation.

[Souly]

Never dither metal.
It gives it a grainy feel, I like this just as much as I loved the steam bot you made a while back.
You seem to have the little poofy animations down and I like em.
I think the side poofs could die out faster though.

[Oltar]

Ok I think it´s done, thank all of you for the crits.

[Oltar]

New work done. A warehouse, only the exterior line. Comments and crits are welcome 


Color added, I´m having some problems with the pipes 

[Oltar]

I started a tileset, I´m having some problems with the grass and with the background of the tunnel. Comments and crits are welcome. Thank you!