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I don't know what it is.

on: January 24, 2006, 05:20:52 pm

Just a li'l sumth'n.

Tried a little bit of an update:


Which one's better? Any crits would be appreciated as well.
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Re: I don't know what it is.

Reply #1 on: January 25, 2006, 04:03:45 am
Thats pretty wild Razz. I think I see a mouth on > side (big green teeth?) and two legs on < side (near the bottom?). Above the mouth it appears to have eyes... or maybe mine deceive me. You used a beatiful color selection however the lack of contrast, near the top mostly, make it hard to crit properly.

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Re: I don't know what it is.

Reply #2 on: January 27, 2006, 06:17:03 am
Thanks for the comment :)
You're right about all the parts, haha. And yeah, I made the pallette a while ago for a piece of lineart that was drawn by Arachne from Pixelation.
Here it be:

I also made this with the same pallette a while ago:

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Re: I don't know what it is.

Reply #3 on: January 27, 2006, 06:44:50 am
Nice texture on the first and color choice on all of them. But they also do look a bit flat. Maybe more dark shades could add more depth (as you have in the last one - my favourite of these). The one based on Arachne's lineart could use a bit more definition on the volume, it's hard to tell some inner shapes (like above that "eye" thing).
Maybe you could also play a bit with the outline's color. It really pops out from otherwise relatively low contrast colors.

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Re: I don't know what it is.

Reply #4 on: January 27, 2006, 02:44:18 pm
Very stylish stuff :)
The flying Monster is my favorites !
Keep it up .