Mockup [WIP]

[Tuna Unleashed]

for an MFGG compo.

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Hellooooooooo?

[Corinthian Baby]

The sprites are too big man, you have no room for maneuverability and level design.

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I'm making it like a fighting game or something.

[Souly]

Well the title said mockup and all you had on the image was a bone bowser with a leg growing out of his stomach since it's not far back enough.
His back hand is also hard to make out and his spikes are not in perspetive to his shell.
The body however I do really like, and his skull.

I'm not sure what the ground is supposed to be, marble? stone? marblestones?

[Tuna Unleashed]

Uhh, his leg does come out of his stomach.. But I'll get on the rest. Also, its supposed to be one of the towers in Bowser's Castle.
edit: just have to add the rain and HUD.

[Dr D]

You should always post your references..

Anyways, I'd say you should make the ground more readable, and edit the wall so it 'pops' a bit more, shade/highlights on each brick.

[Dusty]

He is way off balance. His legs are coming horizontally out of his stomach while he looks as though he is leaning backwards. He needs to lean INTO his legs, while his legs support him from under. If you get what I'm saying.

[Quake]

I suggest making the saturation of the purple sky less..

It stands out too much, and conflicts a lot with mario.

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