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[wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

on: January 26, 2009, 09:44:17 pm


Still a WIP(as said in the topic title) Just looking for some C+C on it.

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #1 on: January 27, 2009, 02:23:17 am
SO far pretty decent, but...why eliminate the hair and so on? it seems oh so simple as it is right now.

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #2 on: January 27, 2009, 02:26:22 am
I'm not done, it's a WIP... I'm saving the hair for last.

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #3 on: January 27, 2009, 02:29:24 am
then why hold back and just give us the face, if its a wip, move forward to completion.

your choice of color, is your voice of color
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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #4 on: January 27, 2009, 02:55:27 am
Because I wanted to get some crits on the face before I moved onto the hair?


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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #5 on: January 27, 2009, 03:45:50 am
why not do it all and get crits on it all.

your choice of color, is your voice of color
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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #6 on: January 27, 2009, 03:48:10 am
why not do it all and get crits on it all.

...because I'd rather perfect each peice, piece by piece, then get it together, then go from there.

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #7 on: January 27, 2009, 04:14:54 am
Arachne had a good post about working on each piece bit by bit at Pixeljoint. She explained how it's better to get things sketched out somewhere else, though, but I agree with balls01. Working on each bit piece by piece might make you end up screwing up proportions or give up on something. I've always thought it a good idea to sketch out your general sprite/scene and then add what needs to come as you work.

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Yeah, I know the feeling.  In addition to posting in the forums early in the process, I think it's also a good idea to start with something sketchy and gradually refine everything instead of finishing one part at a time. It should prevent you from becoming too attached to it until the end.


That said, I think you're doing well so far. It captures an anime style! You might want to make things stand out more, though, as everything looks fairly flat so far. That might be a stylistic choice, however.

Anyways, good luck on this! (I love how you randomly come back out of nowhere and post this same thing everywhere, lol.)

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #8 on: January 28, 2009, 06:30:20 pm
Thanks Dex.

Ok, So. I've progressed a fair amount since I last updated, though i'm stuck on the hair.



I really need some help on it.

(http://www.sendspace.com/file/vgcs7x the .gal file for the layers[for GG users])

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #9 on: January 28, 2009, 06:40:32 pm
I think the skin needs more contrast? And isn't it a bit too unsaturated, or does the reference character have that skin color?

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #10 on: January 28, 2009, 07:48:02 pm
Thanks Dex.

Ok, So. I've progressed a fair amount since I last updated, though i'm stuck on the hair.



I really need some help on it.

(http://www.sendspace.com/file/vgcs7x the .gal file for the layers[for GG users])

the hair needs more texture but i loved the blood flow and the smile xD but yeah some more contrast on the face would look great!

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #11 on: January 28, 2009, 08:37:32 pm
Goin on what Emtch said yeh I agree it needs more contrast and a bit more saturation, im not totally aware of who this character is but this is what I'd do from here.

<< Edit with green in skin << Edit with red in skin

Some more colour in the skin imo more than anything and instead of greys to AA to black from white and on the skin why not use something more colourful for variation. This would work with a red or green.
Also be a bit more daring in sharing palette colours, hue shifts and all that malarkey. I've tried to improve the AAing too, parts look a bit blured while other parts could do with more AA. The dark red of the tongue can be transfered to AAing the hair, as will a shade on the teeth if altered slightly. May not be your thing but colour sharing can sometimes improve a piece and keep the colour count down.
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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #12 on: January 28, 2009, 09:06:03 pm
Thanks Terley, I definately see what you're saying, and yeah, I have to agree on my Over AA for around the lower mouth.

I Like the colour sharing with the green, not so much the red.


I'll see what I can come up with.

Btw, It's Mion from Higurashi no Naku Koro ni.