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[wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

on: January 26, 2009, 09:44:17 pm


Still a WIP(as said in the topic title) Just looking for some C+C on it.

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #1 on: January 27, 2009, 02:23:17 am
SO far pretty decent, but...why eliminate the hair and so on? it seems oh so simple as it is right now.

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #2 on: January 27, 2009, 02:26:22 am
I'm not done, it's a WIP... I'm saving the hair for last.

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #3 on: January 27, 2009, 02:29:24 am
then why hold back and just give us the face, if its a wip, move forward to completion.

your choice of color, is your voice of color
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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #4 on: January 27, 2009, 02:55:27 am
Because I wanted to get some crits on the face before I moved onto the hair?


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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #5 on: January 27, 2009, 03:45:50 am
why not do it all and get crits on it all.

your choice of color, is your voice of color
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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #6 on: January 27, 2009, 03:48:10 am
why not do it all and get crits on it all.

...because I'd rather perfect each peice, piece by piece, then get it together, then go from there.

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #7 on: January 27, 2009, 04:14:54 am
Arachne had a good post about working on each piece bit by bit at Pixeljoint. She explained how it's better to get things sketched out somewhere else, though, but I agree with balls01. Working on each bit piece by piece might make you end up screwing up proportions or give up on something. I've always thought it a good idea to sketch out your general sprite/scene and then add what needs to come as you work.

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Yeah, I know the feeling.  In addition to posting in the forums early in the process, I think it's also a good idea to start with something sketchy and gradually refine everything instead of finishing one part at a time. It should prevent you from becoming too attached to it until the end.


That said, I think you're doing well so far. It captures an anime style! You might want to make things stand out more, though, as everything looks fairly flat so far. That might be a stylistic choice, however.

Anyways, good luck on this! (I love how you randomly come back out of nowhere and post this same thing everywhere, lol.)

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #8 on: January 28, 2009, 06:30:20 pm
Thanks Dex.

Ok, So. I've progressed a fair amount since I last updated, though i'm stuck on the hair.



I really need some help on it.

(http://www.sendspace.com/file/vgcs7x the .gal file for the layers[for GG users])

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Re: [wip] Mion's Face from higurashi

Reply #9 on: January 28, 2009, 06:40:32 pm
I think the skin needs more contrast? And isn't it a bit too unsaturated, or does the reference character have that skin color?