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Re: she wants to steal your desserts.

Reply #10 on: January 22, 2009, 05:56:31 pm
The fact that the hearts disapear in the reverse order makes it a bit obvious the whole animation loops, something to avoid in animation. I'd let the hearts disapear in the order they appeared, so let the bottom one disapear first. Alternate way would be making them pop, that'd be cute as hell :)

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Re: she wants to steal your desserts.

Reply #11 on: January 22, 2009, 06:08:00 pm


Pop? xD I should try that. Nevertheless, until then...

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Re: she wants to steal your desserts.

Reply #12 on: January 22, 2009, 10:58:39 pm
Ok, since we're happily nitpicking anyway, how about this:

Making the hearts float up slightly pixel-by-pixel before they pop, to make them feel a bit more 'alive' (I know they are not, but you get it) I think that would make it all feel more animated-y

Also while you're animating her, I can see she's trying to seduce us to think she's all nice, but I wanna see her eat some stolen cake! ;D

Also, really requesting more arts : D I really wanna see some more!
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Re: she wants to steal your desserts.

Reply #13 on: January 23, 2009, 09:03:15 pm
I'll keep this in mind, and fiddle around with it in my spare time.

But really, Jad, you're right. I'll be making more art then, perhaps one with a different pallete and such. <: