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Offline Emtch

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Lion

on: January 12, 2009, 06:52:10 pm
My progress on the dragon got deleted in a computer crash, so I put it to rest.
Here's a lion. In a frame.

4 colors used.

Comments and critique would be awesome.

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Re: Lion

Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 07:27:09 pm
face is a bit too slim above the jaw line.  The slope should have a more a shallow gradient. Also where is his man? or is it a she?

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Re: Lion

Reply #2 on: January 14, 2009, 03:33:09 pm
face is a bit too slim above the jaw line.  The slope should have a more a shallow gradient. Also where is his man? or is it a she?
It has a mane already, but yeah the jaw is too slim. Gonna work on that.

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Re: Lion

Reply #3 on: January 15, 2009, 01:51:44 am
You mean the yellow on the left and right? if so why is it isn't attached to the head, it looks separate. Google a pic on lion.