[WIP] LuckyF's pixel Dump

[Snippa]

nice... it's Ultra Magnus! or perhaps not Optimus Prime tis his name 
I like the coloring, but I also don't like it 
Perhaps you could add some hint that he's made out of metal?

Pfft! It could be the toy version!!!
No real crits on optimus unless you do want to make him look more real and less like a toy. Looks good.

[LuckyF]

It's allways interesting to learn something new, so yes, I wan to know how to make him more real.

[Snippa]

It's allways interesting to learn something new, so yes, I wan to know how to make him more real.

Get rid of the white lines. They're not needed. If you're worried about needing an edge defined then there isn't a big enough difference between your base color and your shading.
Use a darker red and a darker blue, and then add a "shine" to the glass & metal.

Here's an example of some old work of mine that I did to make a window look like glass:

It's not perfect, but I think you get the idea.

I was going to show you an example of a metallic object I made around the same time as that window, but sadly I was a fool back then and most of my art was saved as .jpg files.
oh well

[LuckyF]

Thanks for the tip .... ill give it a try

[LuckyF]

A little update ... Well...Tried to do what you told me about colors end white edges. Think It's fine now ... But with this shine on metal, I got stuck.... Just don know how to do it ... so If you or enyone else could do a litle edit, maybee on his shoulder,
and show me how to do it ... well that would be great.

[LuckyF]

A little addition to OP ... the autobot logo )

[Destiny]

Well, you've certainly improved in the time you posted the last thing and this. It looks really nice. You have a little bit of banding with the grey around the black markings (diagonal lines?) closest to the red.

There is nothing much I can really say other than its good.

[LuckyF]

Did an avatar for a friend