AuthorTopic: manticore WIP *Updated 19/01-06*  (Read 3566 times)

Offline mrmean

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manticore WIP *Updated 19/01-06*

on: January 16, 2006, 05:59:16 pm

Previus stages:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/5.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/7.png

i used this image for the base/pose http://www.exzooberance.com/virtual%20zoo/they%20walk/lion/Lion%20485061.jpg
time dedicated: about 3.5hours

as you can see im having problems with the paws
c&c plz
« Last Edit: January 19, 2006, 01:59:18 pm by mrmean »

Offline Helm

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Re: manticore WIP

Reply #1 on: January 16, 2006, 06:01:28 pm
my critique: it's not finished.

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Re: manticore WIP

Reply #2 on: January 17, 2006, 05:04:11 am
ummm...add shading and selout?  As helm said, it's not really close enough to being done to properly critique...

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Re: manticore WIP

Reply #3 on: January 17, 2006, 05:08:58 am
The wings look a bit too curved to me right now...maybe shell-like? They should be more pointy and batlike. Dragony.

It seems to me that you've begun AAing too soon.

The eyes should be lower...just a bit...maybe 1....2 px?

Make him fluffy...I feel like hugging something fluffy.

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Re: manticore WIP *Updated 19/01-06*

Reply #4 on: January 19, 2006, 01:58:43 pm