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Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
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Ninjafro
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Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
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December 07, 2008, 04:43:52 pm
I just started this yesterday. I kind of got the beard looking how I want it to, but it looks kind of off. I also started the hat and got stuck.
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Critique and help me improve!
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Ninjafro
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Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
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December 07, 2008, 05:59:26 pm
Edit: began work on the face and gave the beard some more contrast.
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Red_Mist
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Not enough pixels in the world.
Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
Reply #2 on:
December 07, 2008, 06:27:07 pm
Hey this guy goes to show you that when it comes to Santaclause and him hiring elves... his company does not endorse racial profiling! lol
Other than that, I cant give you any critique on it other than his cheeks seem kinda pointy and funny to me.
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Ninjafro
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Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
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December 07, 2008, 06:46:33 pm
Edit: smoothed out the highlighted areas a bit.
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Sherman Gill
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Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
Reply #4 on:
December 07, 2008, 06:59:31 pm
I don't think that smoothing was necessary with the low contrast you have right now.
What are the grey things? A moustache?
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Ninjafro
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Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
Reply #5 on:
December 07, 2008, 07:02:51 pm
Yes, they are a moustache. I purposely gave the different parts of his hair different colors to make it slightly random/confusing.
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Shred
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Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
Reply #6 on:
December 07, 2008, 07:04:20 pm
The moustache appears to start below the mouth, by the way.
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Ninjafro
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Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
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December 07, 2008, 07:09:32 pm
I have the mouth being masked by the beard. o.O There isn't even a mouth on there.
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bengo
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Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
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December 07, 2008, 07:42:50 pm
Here's an edit of mine, your piece lacks contrast and some color reduction can be done, like Shred said, mustache is too low(didn't change this on my edit but yeah it needs to be more next to the nose).
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Ninjafro
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Re: Wierd black guy with an orange beard WIP
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December 07, 2008, 07:48:14 pm
That is a good edit, but that wasn't quite what I was going for. o.o
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