420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

[I Am Uh]

I've been working on this for a about an hour, and I was wondering if I'm headed in the right direction? I need some tips.
Never done this sorta thing I wanna try something new... You know, improve my skills, lol.

[skeddles]

Not much to say really, looks good so far.

Personally I'd make the second lightest color more saturated and more yellow, and darkest(besides black) a tad more blue. You might want to avoid black too, use a dark green.

The line art also isn't exactly 1 pixel by 1 pixel. You might want to fix that.

Now... GO GO GO!

[I Am Uh]

Okay, I took your advice about the color and it really helped. I decided to make a thick black outline because I think it fills out the image well.

[Souly]

That is quite a fat flat leaf.
Perhaps add some points to the leaves?

[I Am Uh]

Yeah, I know the leafs a bit distorted, but I'm not working on that part yet. What do you mean points?

[Souly]

Points?

[I Am Uh]

Ahhh, I see...

Ok, I think I'm pretty much done with the letters. I shortened em up a bit so it would look better. I'm gonna start working on the leaf now, any tips?

P.S
BTW, my birthday is on 4/20, that's what drove me to do this piece.

Edit: Plus I smoke a lot too but don't tell anyone, lol. Just kidding, I dont give a s**t who you tell.

[skeddles]

I just noticed, the 2 is a Z.

[I Am Uh]

While in many situations the 2 could be mistaken for a Z, I highly doubt it will be here.

[balls01]

ahh the elements of grafiti yeah that 2 could be a z or even an S

thry the two more like this


(ive done some unwanted wall murals in my time)