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420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

on: October 31, 2008, 01:21:30 am

I've been working on this for a about an hour, and I was wondering if I'm headed in the right direction? I need some tips. :crazy:
Never done this sorta thing I wanna try something new... You know, improve my skills, lol.
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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #1 on: October 31, 2008, 01:30:02 am
Not much to say really, looks good so far.

Personally I'd make the second lightest color more saturated and more yellow, and darkest(besides black) a tad more blue. You might want to avoid black too, use a dark green.

The line art also isn't exactly 1 pixel by 1 pixel. You might want to fix that.

Now... GO GO GO!

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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #2 on: October 31, 2008, 01:56:48 am

Okay, I took your advice about the color and it really helped. I decided to make a thick black outline because I think it fills out the image well.
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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #3 on: October 31, 2008, 02:25:38 am
That is quite a fat flat leaf.
Perhaps add some points to the leaves?

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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #4 on: October 31, 2008, 02:41:34 am
Yeah, I know the leafs a bit distorted, but I'm not working on that part yet. What do you mean points?
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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #5 on: October 31, 2008, 02:50:27 am

Points?

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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #6 on: October 31, 2008, 03:49:48 am
Ahhh, I see...

Ok, I think I'm pretty much done with the letters. I shortened em up a bit so it would look better. I'm gonna start working on the leaf now, any tips?

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BTW, my birthday is on 4/20, that's what drove me to do this piece.

Edit: Plus I smoke a lot too but don't tell anyone, lol. Just kidding, I dont give a s**t who you tell. :B
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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #7 on: October 31, 2008, 07:27:29 pm
I just noticed, the 2 is a Z.

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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #8 on: October 31, 2008, 08:38:10 pm
While in many situations the 2 could be mistaken for a Z, I highly doubt it will be here.
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Re: 420, Graffiti Logo [WIP]

Reply #9 on: November 02, 2008, 12:03:14 am
ahh the elements of grafiti yeah that 2 could be a z or even an S

thry the two more like this


(ive done some unwanted wall murals in my time)
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