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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #10 on: January 10, 2006, 04:55:56 pm
Guess I canīt say anything aside from what has already been said before...Itīs purely brilliant! I agree with the masculinity thing that was said before, though...

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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #11 on: January 11, 2006, 05:21:52 am
Very nice.
It kinda looks like her left shoulder is much longer than her right. This is because the neck looks to be on an angle such as / / while it should be like more like / | or / \. Hope that helps, heh. Alliteration!

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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #12 on: January 11, 2006, 05:40:57 am
i agree with everyone here, i think both the portrait and the sprite are great! the left knee cap really bothers me tho... it sticks out too much from the tibia... if it has any bones lol, cuz it seems like its supposed to be tre- like, but other than that is all good.

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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #13 on: January 11, 2006, 06:50:31 pm
*saves pics*, fantastic work Ken, as always. I'm really digging the colors on this piece. Those seedlings are uber cute as well ^^. Like the others already said, the gaia fighter sprite's face  seems a bit masculine, while the portrait is quite feminine.

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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #14 on: January 11, 2006, 09:41:25 pm
thanks for the all the comments :)

i've updated both images.

added some AA to the portrait and changed the face on the fighter, i think she looks a little bit  better now.

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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #15 on: January 11, 2006, 10:12:13 pm
lovely, espc. the colorchoice
i've got no crits on the portrait - perfection imo
the kneecaps on the fighter looks quite odd though, the bottom shading on the left (her right) knee is too dark, the right knee is too far to the right and is ephasized too much, makes her look a bit butchy and unfeminine. Also, as alex said, the neck - face transition looks a bit off, moving the head a pixel to the right might help but i dunno.
Amazing job though
« Last Edit: January 11, 2006, 10:13:48 pm by vedsten »

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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #16 on: January 12, 2006, 04:42:19 am
absolutely beautiful :o
I love the portrait completely, my favourite of KOS06 ;)
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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #17 on: January 12, 2006, 08:12:05 pm
made a few small changes to the fighter, based on the comments i got.
im pretty happy with her now :)

vedsten:
the knees are weird tree stumps ;)

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Re: Fighter and portrait

Reply #18 on: January 13, 2006, 05:37:56 pm

vedsten:
the knees are weird tree stumps ;)

ohh in that case, spot on :)