Tiki Character :WIP:

[Bag Man]

Well, i have created a Tiki Man  . I think it's good but i want your critics and advices to make it better or your opinion. It's for game that every character has those kind of eyes, so i need it to have them.

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The plus signs mark where does the light fall on it.


Thanks

[CaKsTeR]

I like this one better than the bag man! Although, for both of them I think you need to remake the shoulders. Take a look at some pictures, they don't just slant downwards like that.

Hope I helped. 

[Bag Man]

Ok.Thanks for your coment, i would try to do it and modify the feet it seems to be a J but it doesn't it's his toe xD.

I'm happy people like Bag Man, It makes me fell i have done a great work creating him. I have 13 characters more xD.

If some one has other critics post here lol.  I wish someone to critique my lineart.

[skeddles]

The lighting on the head  and the lighting on the body look like they are coming from different directions.

[Bag Man]

Hello, i re-did the shades,the character's face and his wand .

I hope you like it. If there's something to modify please let me know.



See ya!

[Souly]

I know you're going for the cartoony style and all.
But I really dislike the rubber arm. :/

[skeddles]

Looks much better.

I think the two darker shades on the head are too close together. I'd make the lighter one closer to the base color. Same thing with the body.

You don't have to but you may want to add some highlights.

I also agree with souly, the closer arm looks like it has 2 joints(rather than 1).