Don't kill me, man!

[Tarenken]

Need a little help on the hands and shading advice for when I start that step. Also, whatever other crit you can come up with.
Whoever knows where he's from gets a pixel-cookie. 

[Sokota]

I'm not sure about shading, but you may want to take AA into account with those black outlines. There are quite a few jaggies, so might want to touch that up after.

Sokota.

Is it Aoi from a Naruto filler? *Thinks purple thing is his umbrella*

[Tarenken]

Oh, AA is a great idea. I've been trying to fix up the jaggies with little success, however... Mostly around the purple part.
And nope, not from Naruto.

[PASSOUT]

The main thing that stands out in this piece is his hands.This here is a realy good site to understand the hands and it's movements.(http://www.assh.org/Content/NavigationMenu/PatientsPublic/HandAnatomy/Hand_Anatomy_.htm).

In the picture your person's hands seem to have small thumbs and overly out streached fingers.The human hand can only have its fingers streach out so far.

I'm offering an edit to show you how I think it would look best.


I realy do enjoy the face, and you did a great job on the hair.