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Offline MadeyeMike

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[WIP] Bunny Seige - updated oct 5

on: October 01, 2008, 03:06:39 am
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Any suggestions would be much appreciated
« Last Edit: October 05, 2008, 08:00:02 am by MadeyeMike »

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Re: [WIP] Bunny Seige

Reply #1 on: October 02, 2008, 02:53:13 am
I love it! You should elaborate on the defense. Add more little men, weapons etc. Looks great.  :y:

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Re: [WIP] Bunny Seige

Reply #2 on: October 02, 2008, 07:58:50 am
Nice and fun idea!

The catapult has perspective lines indicating a horizon line in front of the wall where as the house hasn't got any. It could work either way with slight modifications, but you have to decide on a unified design for perspective that works on all objects according to the same rules.
« Last Edit: October 02, 2008, 08:01:42 am by JJ Naas »

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Re: [WIP] Bunny Seige

Reply #3 on: October 02, 2008, 08:04:13 pm
I don't think I understand what your saying. Could you explain more please?

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Re: [WIP] Bunny Seige

Reply #4 on: October 02, 2008, 08:28:34 pm
I don't think I understand what your saying. Could you explain more please?
simply put, the catapult and house have different vanishing points

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Re: [WIP] Bunny Seige

Reply #5 on: October 03, 2008, 12:07:05 am
Hows this? I couldn't fix the wall, when I tried it looked really bad :|

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Re: [WIP] Bunny Seige

Reply #6 on: October 03, 2008, 01:50:24 pm
I think you can ignore perspective on the wall and just make a similar kind of front-up perspective run through the length of the entire wall. No one will notice. Just remember to keep it in the same scale with tthe soldier on top of the wall so that he doesn't need to use ladders in order to peek over the top of the wall. This looks like a very interesting scene. :)

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Re: [WIP] Bunny Seige

Reply #7 on: October 05, 2008, 12:36:12 am
did a bit more