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[WIP] Planet

on: September 10, 2008, 02:39:54 am
A planet donde for a spaceship videogame. It would be a layer of the background.
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Re: [WIP] Planet

Reply #1 on: September 10, 2008, 01:44:09 pm
looking very cool so far, the colors work nicely. will you be adding other volcanos? maybe they dont have to be as large as the current one, it just seems odd to only have one.

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Re: [WIP] Planet

Reply #2 on: September 10, 2008, 03:10:12 pm
  • Sweet start! Though I think you could get better utility out of the palette. It jumps from orange right up to yellow then theres a pretty-much-useless near-white following it.
  • I know its insanely early still, but the way you have maroon cracks leading into bright orange tips doesn't work in my mind. What would cause that?
  • Some jaggies and strays around the place but I'm sure you'll get to those.
Looking forward to seeing more! ;D

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Re: [WIP] Planet

Reply #3 on: September 11, 2008, 02:33:10 am
Thank you for the comments guys.
First of all itīs not a volcano, itīs a meteor impact (or something big that hit the planet).
Itīs a sketch so there a lot of things that doesnīt work Iīll fix soon (maroon cracks, orange tips).
When I saw I think "This is madness" because Iīm a noob and I have a lot of work to do with the planet, but later I think this planet is a good challenge for me.
Iīll update soon.
Thank you one more time for the crits  :)
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Re: [WIP] Planet

Reply #4 on: September 18, 2008, 11:34:19 pm
New update but, I have a problem with the rocks and the perspective of the rocks, this planet itīs my personal nightmare  :ouch:
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Re: [WIP] Planet

Reply #5 on: September 20, 2008, 05:32:45 am
set the vanishing point to the center of the planet mass and you should be good to go.