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4things in 1 post [nude warning]

on: September 18, 2008, 12:45:05 pm
Some late pixels i did.


Latest animation, spend 5 hours on it, but there's still timing problems i think...


A little rough for the girl before, trying to get minimal





Two fonts i tried to develop, with the fernch pangram 'mais je veux quinze clubs de golf et du whisky pur' (but i want 15 golfclubs and pure whisky, as in english you have the 'the quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog, a phrase that contents all the letters of the alphabet.

If i get feedback i might post the nude and bouncy try of the girl :D

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Re: 4things in 1 post [nude warning]

Reply #1 on: September 20, 2008, 10:37:08 pm
i see no one has replied to this yet.
is there anything specific you would like critique on?
at first glance the naked animation makes me wonder if the girls cloths are burning off or something.
what is supposed to be going on?
the second animation does achieve a minimalist effect but i feel you could still make it more interesting or add more frames.
fonts seem serviceable.