Thanks guys. That hair is excellent Alkaline, and I'll be sure to implement some of those ideas into future versions.

I've taken some of the advice to heart, like raising the nose and mouth and also making the mouth a little wider. Though still dissatisfied with the nose, I've erased the jacket and nose and am starting to draw the upper torso and then redrawing the coat and shirt over it.
This is the last version on my comp with the neck and jacket.

The new version where I'm redrawing the lower half is as follows:

C+C? On either of them?