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[Batzy]

I made this topic for my avatars, now this is currently my avatar that i made quickly  Here's the first avatar c&c would be really nice to hear 

avatar 1:

[tomblifter]

Could do with some AA, it has some jaggies.

[Batzy]

hey any ideas for center of the image ? i think that the face just don't fit on it. here's the newest version without face and text.

[dro man jerr]

you could pixel like a pencil or somethin artistic like

[Batzy]

Got an inspiration when you said that  heh... so i made a man at desert  and a pencil that's drawing that picture so here it is :

(don't say that the man is too thick because i know it already.)

[Batzy]

sorry for double posting but here's an update:

any ideas how can i make desert beter ? it's maybe too bright for night but what can i do  i would be thankful for c&c

[MrMister]

Needs more contrast between the sky and the Edwardian looking fellow.
Also, look at some pictures of sand/deserts.

and isnt that whole 'batlord' thing a 4chan meam
gross

[tehwexxl0rz]

The glow on that moon is not pixel art. Also, keep your light sources consistent! The pencil is lit from the side opposite of the moon and the man has no specific light source at all.

[Batzy]

Here's an update:


I decided to make something else to center of the image and made also some other changes into it too. hope you like it 

The glow on that moon is not pixel art.

you were right about that. (i have a bad habit to make things quickly  )

[Lurdiak]

Your text is very hard to read, it hurts my eyes.