The donkey's face looks much better and the added volume of the PCs definitely brings that part of the scene far more into the limelight. Great! Just one little nitpick that you can consider when working on the facial expression later - perhaps use more of your lighter colors in the donkey's eye, or more of your darker colors on the little white patch around the eye. This is just for readability's sake, and maybe it's just me - for just a second I thought the donkey's eye was closed and that he just had a bead of sweat on his eyelid.
Incredible work though, good luck at the compo!
