In my eyes this s a senseless piece, having no respectable level of skill in the art, nor message, or something to think about.
Message not necesseraly, but it has a quite clear content to me. I see it as a guy lying on bed and a figure which could be a personification of his bad conscience looking at him in disgust.
That being said, there is nothing to critique here on a pixel level, as it is still way too WIP for that (as others stated).
The composition could use some work. Atm my eye goes to the head of the standing figure and then down to the head of the lying guy, then to the pillow and then back to the head of standing dude again with brief interlude at the chair. To make the concept work better you could have stuff on the desk that signifies work. Open books or something.
The positioning of the dude on the bed is a bit odd, there is a tangent of his heel and bedside. If the figure on the left is supposed to be symbolic of bad conscience/guilt it could be made more obvious by giving it a stronger part in the composition, making it bigger or making it more abstract and menacing looking. The areas which are empty could be defocused by making them murky and dark and then have a dreadful light over the work that is supposed to be done. Just thinking aloud here.
Also for this kinda work I would probably use a really dreary palette apart from certain things (like the menacing glow on the standing figure). In general I think for this a double complementary contrast blue/orange, purple/yellow or a cold-warm contrast with some clever light and darks would work best.
