Kawaii toast mockup

[pixelarg]

hello =D this is a mockup of a game of toast, is a wip, but... I can not improve the BG (??, Background, fund?) besides other things, can you help me?? =D I really appreciate the edits ^^

the mockup ^^:


Thanks ^^

PD: really like the toast! xD!!!

[infinitegames]

I suggest making the dithering on the sides less obvious. I think everything else about the character looks really good, but I"m no expert so take that with a grain of salt.

[kitty]

I like the colors!
You should make the shadow side of the toast (the crust) a darker shade because it blends together with the face.
The eyes of the toaster are over done and capture too much unwanted attention. The squints of the toast are under done and don't stick out enough.