A few crits:
1. I know the eye is supposed to be sort of hidden behind the hair, but right now it's too messy, I can't really tell where the eye ends and hair begins or whether the eye is behind a lock of a hair at all.
2. The pose is awkward and inconstistent, in terms of anatomy (protruding shoulders, narrow chest) and posture. Why is he holding his right hand like that? Is he walking forwards? Does he hold something in his hand? If yes, the show. Either make a straightforward frontal pose, with both arms at rest, or a very defined pose that's identifiable for what it is.