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Offline Wuuhuu

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Re: Yay! Newcomer! [WIP]

Reply #10 on: May 27, 2008, 03:13:14 pm
Okay guys, Im back! I also edited the version after reading your comments.

I deleted the backpack since I couldnd get a really good shape of it, I also tried to get a higher contrast(If thats right).

EDIT: Hmm.. I edited it, cause I accedently hosted the wrong image, and now, I can't click on it to zoom.

SECOND EDIT: Never mind, It appeared to just be my browser. Still, I dont know why there's a white line there.
« Last Edit: May 27, 2008, 03:27:41 pm by Wuuhuu »

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Re: Yay! Newcomer! [WIP]

Reply #11 on: May 27, 2008, 11:19:38 pm
The character seems way too smooth. Try giving him some pockets in his pants or something to make his shading less gradient-like.
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Re: Yay! Newcomer! [WIP]

Reply #12 on: July 03, 2008, 08:15:39 pm
Argh. Super bump. Anyway, I updated it a little and added pockets. Hope its better now.