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inferno (very wip)

on: May 04, 2008, 03:27:20 pm
i'm doing a mockup for a project called inferno, and i'll update if daily cuz i have no other thing to do than this.



this is the initial placeholder for the mockup



this other shows Othero, the game's protagonist. It'll be a platform shooter.
« Last Edit: May 05, 2008, 09:20:21 am by smiker »

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Re: inferno (very wip)

Reply #1 on: May 04, 2008, 06:12:45 pm
Can you tell us a bit more about this guy? Is he human? We might be able to help you more.

Right now the main things I see:
- He doesnt appear to really have joints for his arms or legs, they look elastic.
-The left boot is pretty small compared to the right one.
- His shoulders seem to be set forward past his neck/head.
- You may want to take another approach to the shading on the right boot as well, it looks flat.

gl!
« Last Edit: May 04, 2008, 06:15:50 pm by bedelf »
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Re: inferno (very wip)

Reply #2 on: May 05, 2008, 08:54:42 am
ty!

i think i was bad oriented with the human-skeleton

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Re: inferno (very wip)

Reply #3 on: May 06, 2008, 05:41:36 pm
sprite seems huge for that environment, and pretty much every possible surface has been pillow-shaded to death.