I like the edits. The reflected light off of the bottom of monteboyd's really helps the metallic look and I Am Uh's edit helps to round out the eye and left foot a bit more.
The only other big thing that I see is that his eye appears to be a little too far to the right side of his body (assuming that his eye is supposed to be centered). Alternatively, his right arm may be a bit too far forward on his body.
It actually reminds me a bit of the robots from the later sections of EarthBound.