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last and best job

on: April 26, 2008, 11:57:08 pm
my best job til today, it took me almost a week, please coment it, i want to improve

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Re: last and best job

Reply #1 on: April 27, 2008, 10:26:46 pm
Well, let's start by the trees. They lack detail and shadow. The wire connecting the L and the building looks like its hovering. People need a bit of shadow, and so do a few other things.  Other than that great job. I love how Spider mans holding a yellow balloon :lol:
« Last Edit: April 27, 2008, 10:30:49 pm by VictorR »

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Re: last and best job

Reply #2 on: April 28, 2008, 12:11:53 am
The graffiti is NPA, but otherwise pretty good despite the broken window and the already said things.

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Re: last and best job

Reply #3 on: April 28, 2008, 06:56:03 pm
thanks you two, ill try to do not repeat theses same mistakes in the next time, about the tree i made as i saw in a tutorial, i cant draw good trees by myself :'(

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Re: last and best job

Reply #4 on: April 29, 2008, 12:06:29 am
I tried to edit the trees a bit but they came out to be more of an RPG tree. I dunno how to make ISO trees. Habbo's good resource though, also the shadows were a quick slap on to show what could use shadow.

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Re: last and best job

Reply #5 on: April 29, 2008, 01:03:02 am
Fixing the proportions on the table and chairs would help this piece a lot. they should be proportioned relatively to the people and building and are honestly far too large at the moment. If scaling them down is a big problem the piece might be better served without them, just to keep things looking more natural.