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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #720 on: November 14, 2008, 07:08:53 pm
heheh. Get on an IM program and maybe I can help you with it, give you a few crits...I know u put effort into that critique

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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #721 on: November 14, 2008, 07:47:26 pm
Here's my petty tiles for this collab. Sorry for not putting more energy to do something better. At least I hope it's error free this time.

« Last Edit: November 14, 2008, 07:57:46 pm by ter-o »
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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #722 on: November 14, 2008, 09:08:45 pm
i'm working on the free set of 3


15,37,38

should be finished within a couple of hours
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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #723 on: November 14, 2008, 10:19:26 pm
Seems 15 is already taken i guess. Oh well, maybe next time. Thanks anyway conciet.

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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #724 on: November 14, 2008, 11:19:57 pm
here's an update....Better? worse? I thought splitting the rock in two would help understand that it's liquid coming out of it...which I havent drawn in yet!

I also brushed in with white the posible path of the snake O_o
« Last Edit: November 14, 2008, 11:21:42 pm by Conceit »

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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #725 on: November 15, 2008, 04:59:15 am
@:Conceit: As seeing I just got off work, with dishes to do, I'll right a proper response in a little bit.

Oh, and Raytheon, I do believe your couple of hours are up. Tile 15 should be up tomorrow bout this time. (Hopefully done, but, I will take crit especially if it needs it. Which I have no doubt it will.) I'll go with something much simpler and cleaner this time. And hopefully keep in focus.

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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #726 on: November 15, 2008, 06:57:39 am
technically raytheon still has time, i think.
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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #727 on: November 15, 2008, 10:40:01 am
computer crashed
and though psp7 usually recovers most if not all of the open files because it crashed twice in a row i only have the first half of the images (generally i have about 200 images open at once, i'm too lazy to close any)

if you do 15 xhunter ill work around it to do 37 and/or 38
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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #728 on: November 16, 2008, 07:32:18 am
@Raytheon: Hey, that's cool. I was going to put up a pencil sketch but I couldn't find my camera cord.  :yell: Instead of going home in the afternoon, I instead ended up working ALL DAY LONG! At least 10 hours! However, I have tomorrow off, so I should have time to work on it. Thanks for giving me a chance to do it though. Hopefully, it'll be simple. Imagine what happens after black hawk down only it takes place in a frozen mushroom forest.  ;)

@Conceit: Okay, first of all, lets take a quick look back at my edit.

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/rob/new/xhntrkoconceitcrit.png

Remember my edit at section 2B? I think you still have a bit of a problem there. Since your trying to Merge the lava and the ooze together to make the black liquid, this would have been the place to do it. I see a few drippings of ooze transforming the rock into black. I think that section 2A, the tile that wasn't yours that I edited, would be a good ref for that. I think one of the bigger problems that I have with your tiles is, I want to use the term Flow for some reason, but that doesn't sound right either. They still are a tad bit confusing though. Especially your lava flow section. Great place to merge with the ooze and blackish blue liquids together. However, it seems, a little, dull. Compared to the snake which is bright, vibrant, and active. The lava...looks like it's pouring up or its a red octopus. Try and have the contrast match the guys snake a bit and it'd look much more convincing I think. One of the other minor problems, is those open, black spaces. Either give them a background inside like a cave tile, or maybe something like a star space.

It still looks much better though. And, by the time I've written this, I'm sure you've worked on it a ton, added those liquid flow, and worked on the snake path. So, hopefully my small crit here will be moot by the time you post it up. Looks good!  :y:

(Oh, and you should at least merge a tad with the overhang of tile 23. Just to make the tile merge. And I still think there's a tad enough space there to have the snake come coiling around the back side of the mountain. It is made of liquid after all. :))
« Last Edit: November 16, 2008, 07:39:44 am by xhunterko »

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Re: Isometric Collaboration IV - NEW RULES ON PAGE 13!!!

Reply #729 on: November 16, 2008, 05:16:47 pm


TILE STATUS:

DONE:
AlienQuark: 11, 4
Arachne: 13, 14
big brother: 74, 77, 78, 105
buloght: 40
cave: 108, 112
ceddo: 12, 102, 116
Conceit: 23
Cow: 72
Cure: 44
Dennis: 8, 50
Dokozai: 115
Doppelganger: 43, 75, 76, 107, 62
Dusty: 111
Evil-Ville: 97
Fatalis67: 59, 110
Feron: 57
Froli: 65
Gunne: 45
huZba: 25, 26
Ichigo Jam: 24
ilkke: 28
Jacky-Boy: 20
JJ Naas: 71, 81, 84
Joe: 9
KAT: 48
Kaczor: 17, 35
Kazuya Mochu: 89
Kren: 94
Lackey: 53
Larwick: 98
L___E___T: 7
madPXL: 109
malor: 103
MashPotato: 2, 3
Metaru: 31
Meta|Fox: 27
mice: 85
Mirre: 16, 36
Opacus: 52, 82, 83
pain: 73, 79, 80, 104, 100, 92
Pestilence: 32
Reo: 47
robotacon: 54, 61, 66, 91
Rosse: 51
Sabata: 19
shasheen.: 6
Shrike: 22
skamocore: 21
Skurwy: 46
snake: 39, 41, 42, 67, 90, 18
Souly: 29, 33, 34
surt: 63, 64, 93, 96
ter-o: 117, 86, 69, 87, 88
Trueno: 99
Vertigo-Zero: 95
victorX: 101
vierbit: 55, 56, 60, 49, 70, 68
Xion: 10
Zccc: 5
Zenobia: 1
    DUE TILES _:
Conceit: 30, 58
Raytheon: 15, 37, 38
    FREE TILES:
106, 113, 114
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