Young Angel warrior

[yueprofile]

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did it yesterday.. i always have problem with eyebrows.....
can anyone show me some tips?

C&C welcome

thx

[Corsair]

ALl i can see is that the blue eye is a bit too high and the upper arm is out of proportion with the body. It should have more volume, and be significantly longer, which would require the redrawing of the entire arm. unfortunately, because i rather like the forearm.

[yueprofile]

ALl i can see is that the blue eye is a bit too high,, and the entire arm, while well drawn, is out of proportion with the body. It should have more volume, and maybe the upper arm should be longer, which would require the redrawing of the entire arm.

thx, i actually noticed that too

did an update hehe

[Corsair]

I edited my post there to make the meaning a bit more clear.

Let's see the update, hm?

[Break]

did a very quick and dirty edit



I know proportions aren't supposed to be realistic in this, but I just had to shrink that head. Better to shrink the head then try and rework the entire body, which looks better overall.

Leveled out eyes, put more definition in face
made the wings level around where they should be on the back. As you have it now his left one (our right) is coming out of an awkward place.

Beefed up bicep area a little, it didn't match the thickness of his forearm. Actually in my edit the forearm/hand is still a little too big and his armlet thingy has a curve in it, which makes him arm look bendy, not good. I found this pic that might help on the anatomy.
http://images.amazon.com/images/P/B0000VD12I.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg
Of course you'd probably want to tone it down but it's a start.

I forget what else I did here but I guess the picture speaks for itself. This design and style kinda remind me of an Akira Toriyama design, which is a good thing.

[yueprofile]

did a very quick and dirty edit



I know proportions aren't supposed to be realistic in this, but I just had to shrink that head. Better to shrink the head then try and rework the entire body, which looks better overall.

Leveled out eyes, put more definition in face
made the wings level around where they should be on the back. As you have it now his left one (our right) is coming out of an awkward place.

Beefed up bicep area a little, it didn't match the thickness of his forearm. Actually in my edit the forearm/hand is still a little too big and his armlet thingy has a curve in it, which makes him arm look bendy, not good. I found this pic that might help on the anatomy.
http://images.amazon.com/images/P/B0000VD12I.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg
Of course you'd probably want to tone it down but it's a start.

I forget what else I did here but I guess the picture speaks for itself. This design and style kinda remind me of an Akira Toriyama design, which is a good thing.

thx man, i will post update shortly

[yueprofile]

updated in the original post

[EvilEye]

This is a male or female?

If male the hips are too wide and the upper body too slender. And the chest looks like breasts.

If female the shoulders are too broad and the forearms a tad too thick.

[yueprofile]

This is a male or female?

If male the hips are too wide and the upper body too slender. And the chest looks like breasts.

If female the shoulders are too broad and the forearms a tad too thick.

he was male....
then concept changed, became female now that's why i modified it to more female like
any how, thx i will do some modification base on your suggestion tomorrow

[Terley]

Rough edit, if this is a girl now, I think you could work on the face more. The positioning of the eyes are very skewed and doesn't make much sense, probably breaking you're way of pixelling but it just looks anime to me, if so this is how I'd go about it. Hope this helps.

I think you're using too many colours for the eyes, you're light grey might as well be white and your lightest skin shade isn't so necissery unless you want to use if for highlights. Then I think it needs to be a tad lighter.

But all in all, good progress keep it up