Rough edit, if this is a girl now, I think you could work on the face more. The positioning of the eyes are very skewed and doesn't make much sense, probably breaking you're way of pixelling but it just looks anime to me, if so this is how I'd go about it. Hope this helps.
I think you're using too many colours for the eyes, you're light grey might as well be white and your lightest skin shade isn't so necissery unless you want to use if for highlights. Then I think it needs to be a tad lighter.
But all in all, good progress keep it up 
Thx man, i will do something today
