[WIP] Sunset

[cassiius]

Hi, I've been browsing these forums for some time now, and I decided to go ahead and post one of my pieces for C&C.




My biggest problems that I have with doing this piece is the water, the tree leaves, and the grass.  (I know I have other problems    lol)

[chriskot]

As far as the line art goes, the tree could use some roots and the perspective on the lake doesn't look quite right to me.

I think it would be easier to comment on if it was a bit more fleshed out. So far all that you really have is some line art with mostly solid colours blocked in. The stuff that has already been shaded looks pretty good so far. The leaves, grass, water, and the drop into the lake need some texture for starters. You're bound to find so good help with those under the resource thread in the tutorial and reference sections: http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=3467.0