[WIP] itt 1up makes a horrible attempt at anatomy

[1up]

not sure if I fixed it, but i tried

i also tried making the stomach smaller, but i'm not sure if i like it better like this or not.lol

[LMR]

In my opinion that new stomach looks and fits way better to your character than the old one. 

Also dig that new weapon he carries. 

[1up]

oh wow the shirt turned out horrible

[1up]

GWARGH bump

scrapped the stomach's shading for now and tried shading the scarf

[EvilEye]

GWARGH bump

scrapped the stomach's shading for now and tried shading the scarf

 I like that pose it has very good balance.

 Don't like his right bicep, seems too low or perhaps his forearm is too high. If you stretched the left arm out I am not sure it would be the same length as the right arm.

 He started out fat now he looks pretty slim, unless you want him that way.

[Kcilc]

He has no elbow; Many random muscles. His shoulder looks a little bit disjointed.


Just a little edit of his right arm to point you in the right direction.

I love this piece; sure hope you finish it.