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Big floppy

on: March 13, 2008, 04:43:06 pm
I was bored and I didn't pixel for a long time. So I thought why not make a floppy


The only thing that I think is. It is so empty, but I don't know what I have to put on it

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #1 on: March 13, 2008, 05:49:06 pm
apply depth to the black 'holes'.

add texture to the blue surface?

by the way, there are just a few simeple mistakes, for example, you left a pixel out on the metal sheath.

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #2 on: March 13, 2008, 06:40:49 pm
What is the best way to get texture on it?

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #3 on: March 13, 2008, 07:14:52 pm
I tried the texture myself and this came out:

It's still in progress but yea...

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #4 on: March 13, 2008, 08:35:59 pm
Good start, but if this is supposed to be a 3.5" floppy the proportions are all totally off. Go look for reference.
Also, Disks are usally not textured (well some were, but most not) and are just smooth flat.
There are no ugly colours, only ugly combinations of colours.

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #5 on: March 14, 2008, 03:56:18 pm

Hoply some people got C&C

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #6 on: March 14, 2008, 07:29:38 pm
When making the floppy itself thinner you forgot to adjust the small holes depth. They are too deep.  The arrow should be one pixel deep, these two bottom rechtangles differ in size. Normally they go through the floppy but you could apply a bottom for the left one. The sticker looks weird. It's placed in some kind of hollow but at the edge it's thicker than the floppy. The metal sheath is too thick and it looks like if it was lying on the floppy's surface but it should wrap the floppy.
« Last Edit: March 14, 2008, 07:34:21 pm by Kaczor »
Sorry for my english.

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #7 on: March 14, 2008, 09:41:42 pm
When making the floppy itself thinner you forgot to adjust the small holes depth. They are too deep.  The arrow should be one pixel deep, these two bottom rechtangles differ in size. Normally they go through the floppy but you could apply a bottom for the left one. The sticker looks weird. It's placed in some kind of hollow but at the edge it's thicker than the floppy. The metal sheath is too thick and it looks like if it was lying on the floppy's surface but it should wrap the floppy.

Great :D
Thanks I will work on that :D

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #8 on: March 15, 2008, 01:53:58 pm
I tried to change it. And this is what came out:

Sorry for bad English

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Re: Big floppy

Reply #9 on: March 15, 2008, 09:19:31 pm
Here's my edit. I'm also not experienced and it's my first isometric piece but I hope it helps.
« Last Edit: March 15, 2008, 10:41:28 pm by Kaczor »
Sorry for my english.