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Offline MadeyeMike

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Pink Rose

on: February 14, 2008, 02:15:23 am
Some help please.
 What should I change?

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Re: Pink Rose

Reply #1 on: February 15, 2008, 12:12:32 am


It isn't a very good update, but i just think the middle should be a bit more separated from the second-from-center layer.
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Re: Pink Rose

Reply #2 on: February 15, 2008, 04:31:54 am
Maybe some outer petals that seperate outward from the bud. Even if you want it to just stay as a rosebud, it should probably have some petals at least curling out a little bit. And perhaps you could make the centre darker to indicate shadows and stuff.

Otherwise it's pretty decent though.