[WIP] 9/27 Adventure RPG sprites

[Atnas]

I softened the face, lengthened the nose, moved the corner of the mouth down, gave more structure to the jaw, and fixed his eyebrow. 

Still looks a bit off, but I think you'll get the idea.

[dragonrc]

Haven't done much pixelart lately but felt like doing something. I was too lazy to start anything new( ) so I started editing your link portrait. I did many random edits so I made a gif too so you can see what I changed.

I know the neck looks horrible now, but I hope you still find my edit helpfull in some way.

[Hyrule_SwordsMan]

Well, I feel honored to be your inspiration to start editing pixels xD
I'll see what I can do with his nose, because it seems the main problem. All other stuff (like his eyebow, nose shape and face shape) is ok for me for example, I meant not to show the ending of his face. Just in 2 portraits I show it, but it's not what I want. and some other minor stuff.
Thanks for all C&C 

[dragonrc]

Yeah, maybe the lower left side of the portrait showing the end of the face doesn't fit in with the style. But I do think the lower right side could use some work, the cheek is really big and it makes him look fat. Even moving the cheek 1 or 2 pixels to the left would change that.

[Atnas]

Don't add the shadow/outline to the left side of his nose. If anything it should be highlighted. The face shape isn't so drastically wrong it needs very much editing. Link has a fairly adolescent face, he would have a jaw favoring square over thin. Also, if you make it too thin his other eye doesn't fit...

It isn't so much as moving the cheek to the left as it is giving him a more pronounced jawline through making the angle more acute.

The eyebrow does need to be trimmed a little where it goes up because that just doesn't happen - Eyebrows normally don't span the bridge of the nose. 

[Hyrule_SwordsMan]

UPDATE:
Fixed a bit Link's face... now its more squared :S and a little bit his eyebow
New luteniant... have to think its name xD

[Hyrule_SwordsMan]

Hey everyone
I didn't want to start up a new topic about the exact same thing, so I'm updating this old one

So much time with no pixel art lol
well, anyways here are some updates and some artworks
Luteniant concept


Adlez concept


Link con.


Shinikun con.


Cursed Princess

Although she may not seem very medieval-ish, I really like how it ended up - kinda, because I'm not sure if it's finished.

Marx

Very WIP. I have some concept of him somewhere in my house, so I'm uploading it whenever i find it

==UPDATE==
Luteniant

-portrait. I kinda like it more now :]

Chikoen :/

I can't figure out how to do her fine!

Adlez

Same here :0

[Tobe]

I really impress by the sprite quality! The color theme have a very "Legend of Zelda" feel to it too.

My only complain will be the toning on links clothes. It made them look kinda dirty in comparison. I'd try to go for a much cleaner look, like what you have for the top down sprite.

The portrait suffers a little from the dirty look too.

[politopo]

hi, swordsman
about the pink lady, what about lifting her nose a bit?
something like this:

bye

[Hyrule_SwordsMan]

@ Tobe: Thanks! ^^
What do you mean by 'dirty'? I have a much better battle sprite for link, but i'm not uploading it cuz i have problems with his animation.
@ politopo: Well i did, or tried to but i can't do much more that that.. i have to finish her once and for all, but thanks :]

Here i'm updating with 3 concepts of Marx (yeah, I find them hehe), his portrait, still wip, and some edits here and there...
I think it's better..
I forgot to post it before
elbows and clothes edited
I like where its going ^^