[WIP] the shack

[zi]

nice work

yep the shed need more work ...

fast corrections to show what need maybe ...



board from your front and side walls are in very different directions ... also roof need repairs ...2 beams which are in front part are very big ...  also must clear details because have too much unreadable areas ...

[mobichan]

Updated the shack to have some more twiddly bits and structure.  And just to clarify, the shack is supposed to feel kind of slapped together, so I wasn't trying to make the plank lines too clean or uniform.  A few more touches to the background and I think I'll call it finished.

[Salvage]

Looking much more coherent now, you did well to follow up.
I like the addition of the smokestack.
Being that there appears to be wind blowing the sign towards us, maybe some smoke wisps in the same direction would be nice.
If the sign isn't supposed to be wind blown, it should follow a downwards line similar to the ladder.
This is really growing on me.

[mobichan]

Added a happy pulley line system so the people on these spires can hang out together.  And added a couple visitors.     I think it is done now, unless anyone has anymore suggestions.