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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #60 on: May 19, 2008, 10:54:50 pm
Hmm, I took a break from this to do a different project, then I took a hour or two break from that to work on this again. Fun :crazy:.
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So, obviously, there's a clash of style between the background and foreground, but I have no idea how I'm gonna make that better. What do you guys think?

I think it's mainly because the background trees actually show more depth and detail then the foreground trees.
The foreground just needs far more details, more volume, and more contrast.
I'd make an edit if I weren't so tired.
Maybe tomorrow.
This is coming along real nice tho :D

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #61 on: May 20, 2008, 03:15:34 am
Why is the background brighter then the foreground?

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #62 on: May 20, 2008, 03:22:59 am
Why is the background brighter then the foreground?

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Also, Cuz' I was looking at King Kong screencaps when I was making it :-\
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #63 on: May 20, 2008, 03:49:58 am
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 :crazy: I mucked around with the colours a bit, I think the high saturation and brightness of colours detracts from the foreground too much in your piece. If you reduce this and add more blue hues it will look more like a forest canopy.

Also, this is what I gathered the king king style implied:

Firstly you need the background looking washed out this means it needs to be bright and low saturation. Then you need to increase the shadows darkness on the upper layer so that they stand out more.
« Last Edit: May 20, 2008, 04:04:56 am by zeid »
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #64 on: May 20, 2008, 04:02:25 am
Even with the darkened and desaturated background, I just can't UNSEE the fact that the tree tops are huge slabs of flatness after it was pointed, especially because the tree bases are so prominent in the picture.

That is me, though.  It may supposed to look like that.

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #65 on: May 20, 2008, 04:10:18 am
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Even with the darkened and desaturated background, I just can't UNSEE the fact that the tree tops are huge slabs of flatness after it was pointed, especially because the tree bases are so prominent in the picture.

That is me, though.  It may supposed to look like that.
I agree more detail and better shadding for the leaves is required. However I really only think the foreground tree tops needs any significant detail. Too much detail in the background will just be distracting, not to mention time consuming.
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #66 on: May 21, 2008, 02:03:58 am
Personally I think you gotta try and spice up the grass a bit.
The background is making the foreground look quite bare and looks like less work was put into it.
I like how you've done the building, I just think the grass could do with some more work to it.
Perhaps some actual long blades?
Seems like a lawnmower got it's blades on this forest not too long ago.

As for the tree tops, perhaps just add some dark green as shaded leaves.
« Last Edit: May 21, 2008, 02:07:44 am by Souly »

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #67 on: May 22, 2008, 01:55:27 am
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main character edit attack! Building on pesty's edit! Eyes! She's cockeyed! You're using too many single pixels that noise the forms up!

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #68 on: May 22, 2008, 02:13:56 am
One question: What are the blue lines above the uh, stockings?
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #69 on: May 22, 2008, 02:40:22 am
i'm guessing pants.