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Offline Sherman Gill

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #20 on: January 31, 2008, 05:41:01 am

One frame is all the middle one of the last image (Actually, seems slight change on the neck is there), the other is
portruding hip and different shoulders! - No leggings and longer dress - alternate (our) right leg leg.
Better? Do I need to totally change the neck and shoulders or something?
I want her left leg to be holding most of the weight.

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Feron: Thanks, but I think yours actually looks more manly than mine :-*.
Ben2theEdge und Adarias: Mucho gracias, both of you :). Although- and I know you're not saying I should really strive to make her like Wonder Woman -I feel that both of those are really crappy, super-polarized stylizations of their respective genders.
« Last Edit: January 31, 2008, 05:50:19 am by Sherman Gill »
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #21 on: January 31, 2008, 06:13:41 am
Ben2theEdge und Adarias: Mucho gracias, both of you :). Although- and I know you're not saying I should really strive to make her like Wonder Woman -I feel that both of those are really crappy, super-polarized stylizations of their respective genders.

You don't need to make her look like wonder-woman, but standing like her wouldn't hurt you.  newest edit is imo barely an improvement....and the dress is not the way to go at all.  Shoulders need to come way in and the legs just shouldn't be so far apart.

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Better? Do I need to totally change the neck and shoulders or something?
absolutely.


something like this might be the first step on a long road to a cute, boyish chick:


where is arne when you need him? he can always pull off character poses pretty nicely.
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #22 on: January 31, 2008, 07:39:25 am

Dunno about this one.
My collaborator for the game asked if she could have longer hair, so that was rather quickly tacked on.
Redrew pretty much everything but the head and the arms.
I kinda like the shoulder level ring of highlights around yours, Adarias... I must remember to try and emulate it :P.
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #23 on: January 31, 2008, 08:08:08 am
Why arent you using the skin tones from the face on her hands?

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #24 on: January 31, 2008, 10:55:28 am
latest is definitely a step or six in the right direction.
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #25 on: January 31, 2008, 02:38:12 pm
Massive improvements, Sherman! It's lookin' really good!

I think you can still push it a little further though; here's my attempt


I changed her pose a little more... maybe I made her a little too slutty :-[ but I also made some adjustments to her face; I made her nose a little smaller, made the shading on her cheek a little softer, and gave her eyelashes - something I didn't pick up on before but noticed was absent while I was editting.
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #26 on: January 31, 2008, 10:35:59 pm

Back to the short hair! :)
Final?
Ben's edit has made me unsure of whether or not I want both of the hands on the hips...
Feron: That's because her hands are actually covered. It isn't really logical, but, well, you know, I like it and all.

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #27 on: January 31, 2008, 11:56:17 pm
I think there's something very wrong with the eyes that I can't exactly pinpoint, but the issue is addressed very well in Ben2theEdge's edit and I think you should go in that direction.

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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #28 on: February 01, 2008, 04:32:35 am
Mm, I dunno, I'm really not much a fan of the super dark eyelids, and my attempts at something inbetween have for the most part been unnoticable or ugly.
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Re: [WIP]Danger Dinosaur Danny et Werewolf Game Mockup

Reply #29 on: February 01, 2008, 08:31:41 pm
Walk cycle time :crazy:

Oof. I think I fucked up the red arm.
Actually, I think I fucked up both arms.
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