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Re: [vulgar] Rehab Pacman

Reply #10 on: January 01, 2008, 01:12:37 am
I believe it's spelled withdrawal.
Odd that the corner of the shadow doesn't line up with the corner of the wall+ground.
The bottle kinda blends into the wall making it hard to decipher at first.

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Re: [vulgar] Rehab Pacman

Reply #11 on: January 02, 2008, 05:38:56 am

-cut down colors (I'm still confused what happen....something must have vuked up when I saved?)
-fixed typo *blushes*
-didn't really work on the beard much, and I like the direction Sherman Gil was going.....plus, the scar is still bothering me...

concerning roundness or lack thereof: come on, anybody can use the circle tool!  :hehe:  Really, it's purposely messy ;)

More direction/critique would be yummy :)
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Re: [vulgar] Rehab Pacman

Reply #12 on: January 02, 2008, 06:35:08 am
The lines of the wall on either side seem considerably off meeting without some significant curvature.
I know your not after a straight wall edge but it seems a bit too extreme.

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Re: [vulgar] Rehab Pacman

Reply #13 on: January 05, 2008, 12:53:24 am
i think instead of "after shave" the term you are looking for is "5 o'clock shadow"

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Re: [vulgar] Rehab Pacman

Reply #14 on: January 05, 2008, 07:46:16 pm
The 5' a clock shadow seems a bit...blue...