[WIP]mona lisa

[DJ gman]

5 colors wip mona lisa im working on. C+C

[Opacus]

First thing I noticed is that she kinda looks like a man. With the dithering on the chin, it kinda looks like a 2 day beard.
Second, the way you did the chin makes her look a bit fat, like she has a double chin.
You should make more difference between the nexk and the face. Darker, absolute shades. Lose the dithering there.
The AA on the hands doesn't work, I'll make an edit later if you want.

[eck]

I would just remove the dithering on the face and on the cloth-skin transition on her boobs.

[DJ gman]

yeah an edit would help since im kinda new to these kind of color limitations.

[Reo]

Quick edit,hope it helps. (Gah my edit dosn't look like her at all )

[eck]

edit of rio's edit.  tried to show you how to fix some of those banding issues, remove some dither, and get rid of those tacky outlines.
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[DJ gman]

new edit after previous c+c

[happymonster]

That's looking better, though I think her mouth is a bit too high.

[Dusty]

I think the smile is way too 'strong'

[DJ gman]

*fixed lol

it's kinda hard to make her smile less suttle on this size of a pixelart I mean you can edit one pixel and not make it suttle enough and you can take away one and make it too suttle :\