Wow, really nice! Congrats!
Well, first of all the head seems TOO flat. Make the back part of the hat more visible.
The left (her right) side of her hair seems too polygonal
Her skirt is complitly awesome. So it is that it contrasts a lot with the rest of her clothers. Add some bright to it.
Her hads seems a bit small and her legs extra fat(between her skirt and her high socks)
Those two golden buttons are somehow odd.
Reduce it's saturation and make the highlight yellow and the shadows orange so it looks like gold.
I don't really like the green stuff of her weapon and the chain of it.
Her neck seems too long.
I don't really like the highlights of her socks.
Well, i think that's all. Although it has a lot of to-do things it's very very brilliant!
cya!
