Williamm O' Wisp [WIP]

[Kfuchoin]

Hello Guys, this is my first post here on pixelation.
Merry x-mas to all.
ok now to the point
i'm making sort of a black mage based on a dwarwing i made last week and i need to help




Critics, Comments, Edits all are welcome
thanks

[EyeCraft]

Hi kfuchoin, welcome to the forum.

Colours are ultra-saturated. Steer away from the default MS-Paint colours. Far away. Outlines are pretty good none-too-jagged. I say lose the black outlines though. Also, check out some tutorials and books on shading, then come back to this piece.

[Hyrule_SwordsMan]

EyeCraft is right. The colors are very Saturated. There is a lot of contrast due this saturation.
Reduce the saturatioon, make HUE variations and post the edit