Sourt's Dragon [WIP]

[Kfuchoin]

Sourt's Dragon,
whis is a WIp as you should have noticed, amm i dunno how to shade the wings and the "tummy" but there it is


Critics, Comments and possible edits are all welcome

[Faktablad]

You should try to use the black outline as a guide and get rid of it as you go, because right now it could possibly hurt your piece by making it too coloring-book-ish.  Try and use shading to define the forms, not outlines to define the forms.  Keep going, I can't wait to see more.

[Hyrule_SwordsMan]

It looks quiet pro!
You should review its right elbow.
There are a lot of shadings that look somehow bad.
Don't shade them so "suddenly" You make one line and then dither one side of it. You should dither both sides of the line. Use a bit more of colors.

I can't really say much due it's very WIP level.