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Anya Oliwa's Face feedback

on: October 14, 2020, 10:37:10 am
Greetings! I'm doing Wolfenstein The New Order cast portrait and I'm struggling about one character, Anya Oliwa. I try to use my reference at same size and even that I didn't figure out why I cannot replicate well in contrast with her husband that I could do it very well. Can someone point where I'm did wrong?

Thank you!



This was the reference that I use.


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Re: Anya Oliwa's Face feedback

Reply #1 on: October 14, 2020, 10:55:37 am
https://drawabox.com
https://www.proko.com
Fundamentals will help you immensely. That's my biggest recommendation.

Also, fixing work after you're given critiques is helpful. I did a 10-20 min edit on your samus sprite I recommend checking it out.
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Re: Anya Oliwa's Face feedback

Reply #2 on: October 14, 2020, 11:05:45 am
https://drawabox.com
https://www.proko.com
Fundamentals will help you immensely. That's my biggest recommendation.

Also, fixing work after you're given critiques is helpful. I did a 10-20 min edit on your samus sprite I recommend checking it out.

I'm following your advice, I'm watching the fundamentals while sometimes I just draw.

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Re: Anya Oliwa's Face feedback

Reply #3 on: October 14, 2020, 11:08:12 am
Oh wait, just remembered, my apologies that Samus sprite wasn't yours it was Jmrhdb's (you did an edit for him). Well for this the other thing I'd recommend is doing bigger with it other than that it's really down to fundamentals and practicing those. Specifically for this you can check out Proko's head drawing videos. it's good you're practicing, keep doing that.

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Re: Anya Oliwa's Face feedback

Reply #4 on: October 14, 2020, 11:19:31 am
Oh wait, just remembered, my apologies that Samus sprite wasn't yours it was Jmrhdb's (you did an edit for him). Well for this the other thing I'd recommend is doing bigger with it other than that it's really down to fundamentals and practicing those. Specifically for this you can check out Proko's head drawing videos. it's good you're practicing, keep doing that.

No problem, I will do it. Thank you!