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Reply #40 on: November 22, 2007, 08:53:01 am
you coul;d drop the odd bit of yellow into the hair shine too... make it look extra shiny...

btw - what sdoes anamunamuna mean? is it some kind of jinx/hex?
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Reply #41 on: November 22, 2007, 08:54:37 am
Probably just mumbling in a stunned situation.

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Reply #42 on: November 22, 2007, 07:53:52 pm
you coul;d drop the odd bit of yellow into the hair shine too... make it look extra shiny...

btw - what sdoes anamunamuna mean? is it some kind of jinx/hex?

I concur full heartedly. This is looking great. Keep it up ;D
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Reply #43 on: March 21, 2008, 11:43:01 pm
omy. o:

It's definitely been a while. Months, actually. D:

Between school, home, and my health, there were loads o' stuff to deal with lately-- Hopefully I'm back. And hopefully I haven't broken a rule by reviving an old thread. :'D



I updated the hair to make it look more alike to now. The mouth was pissing me off, so I covered it with my favourite scarf. >D Made the eyes smaller, since my eyes are pretty lazy-lookin'. Seemed to me to be a shame to not finish this. <:

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Re: Avatar; omy longtimenosee o:

Reply #44 on: March 23, 2008, 07:55:51 am
I can't believe I'm double-posting, but... o:

UPDATE:

Ahh, looks like me. Incredibly tired. I really think I look /more/ like a drunken ex-con now.  ^-^



And I guess the girly side of me has become attached to cute things. Ew. >:

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Re: Avatar; omy longtimenosee o:

Reply #45 on: March 23, 2008, 11:02:01 am
I think you should add some shading to that scarf. It looks pretty flat right now.
Something like this maybe?



It's just a rough edit, but I think this shows what I mean.
Other than that, pretty cool avatar  :y: ;D
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Re: Avatar; omy longtimenosee o:

Reply #46 on: March 23, 2008, 06:52:10 pm


Like this?  <:

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Re: Avatar; omy longtimenosee o:

Reply #47 on: March 23, 2008, 07:45:02 pm
Please don't cover up the mouth with a scarf just because it's pissing you off! It looks silly in my opinion, especially since the scarf is placed on the jaw rather than the usual neck positioning, meaning it would have to be quite tightly placed, with stretch marks or something. At least have another band on the neck to hold it up with. I suggest you work on the mouth instead. Other than that, good updates imo. :)

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Re: Avatar; omy longtimenosee o:

Reply #48 on: March 23, 2008, 09:33:02 pm
Odam.

I knew I wasn't the only person that thought it was somewhat odd.  D:

I worked on the mouth, like you told me. I made two versions. I don't know which one is the best.

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Re: Avatar; omy longtimenosee o:

Reply #49 on: March 23, 2008, 10:10:20 pm
without the scarf is much more feminine, take that as you will in your decision.
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