Face (WIP)

[ilkke]

Not bad. You need a bit more contrast around the mouth IMHO

[willfaulds]

i think 2 areas that you've currently over looked are the eyes and glasses. the eyes need a more realistic shading in my opinion and you could do alot with glare/reflection on the glasses.

however before you do that i think you need to define some really dark areas on the face giving it volume. perhaps with a darker shade.

[boojiboy]

Update:


Updated the eyes a little, it's hard to make them look realistic.
Tried to fix the mouth, looks better but it's also hard to make look realistic.

[brianskywalker]

I'd say the dark outline around the eyes (eyelashes?) is a bit strong, maybe a lighter color would work better.

[boojiboy]

Better?