[WIP] Selout challenge from PJ

[Helm]

quite better hands, very nice face. You sure she should be looking one way and pointing that thing in another though?

[big brother]

Oooh, you could put a clutch of eggs inside the coil on the left side. That way, it's like she's guarding her babies! This addition could add the awesome to this piece.

[eghost]

Gah...You crazy people have now successfully inspired me...
Current version:


The broom is a byproduct of not being able to figure out how to make a weapon that I'd be happy with and a touch of forgetfulness in regards to color grabbing on my part...

[pkmays]

Now all she needs is a kinky house wife outfit. :^))

Love what you've done with the face. I'd say brighten up the whites of her eyes and darken her mouth, they are getting lost in the face and making it look too blurry. Her hair could also do with some smoother AA on her left / our right.

[Reldros]

I'm pretty sure it's just me, but where the snake tail attaches to the torso it looks a bit off.

The snake tail looks like it should be twisting the entire torso a bit more judging by the belly part of the tail. It also seems like the tail is connecting to the human torso at an angle and the body is pivoting 90 degrees straight up from it, creating an awkward joint or something.

Nothing really worth making a big deal out of, but it's just the way I saw it.

Edit: Tried to show what I mean..

[eghost]

Latest:


I'm not happy with the top yet...Still tossing around what I want to do with it...I may leave it like this and get moving on the tail, and see if maybe that helps give me some ideas...*grins* Sexy housewife huh...Hmmm...;P

Aside from that I corrected a few anatomy issues that I could immediately see...

@Reldros: I see what you're getting at, and shifted the center a hair to accomodate...Though I think that's about as much shift as I can put in and not leave her feeling stiff...

[Sherman Gill]

But but but... the black leather...
It looks like... you've gone from super-bondage hardcore outfit, to housewife wearing a sexy black leather top, to MUNDANE HOUSEWIFE WITH BORING AND PLAIN OUTFIT WITH NO SAVING GRACES.
And honestly, she looks too young to be a nagging housewife.

[eghost]

Good point...Hmmm...I thik Ican resurrect the leather look...It did have a better feel too it than what I was trying for..
Think I'll set it up more like a reversed vest...ie. no zipper on th front...

[Crow]

I dont like the eyes in your newest edit, I liked the other ones better. I dont know why, I think it just makes her look...well...more awesome? Cant really describe it

[eghost]

Latest:


Still not entirely satisfied with the top...Need to find a ref pic for leather...

Fixed the eyes, cause they were bugging me too...And adjusted a bit of shading on the torso and arms...