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Offline mLws

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Office Desk

on: August 22, 2020, 10:50:31 am
How do I improve this office desk I made?

I tried to make a desk phone on the right most part of the table but it doesn't look like one.

Any tips and critiques on how to improve this art?
« Last Edit: August 22, 2020, 11:14:29 am by mLws »

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Re: Office Desk

Reply #1 on: August 22, 2020, 01:55:01 pm
Draw a lamp somewhere in the top right corner and then shadow objects according to the light.

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Re: Office Desk

Reply #2 on: August 22, 2020, 08:46:49 pm
hey, just a small suggestion: it helps to link the file in an image, like this:

...so you can zoom it in the browser!(click-to-zoom-in, shift+click-to-zoom-out)
Nice Work! ...clean lines! :P

...and are we not requiring new users to introduce themselves anymore?
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Re: Office Desk

Reply #3 on: August 26, 2020, 01:55:26 pm
Yeeeah, it depends on what you wanna do with it, but it would improve the piece and I guess would help you to improve your skills if you added shadows whilst, if possible, tried to keep a limited (small) number of colors.

Right now everything is pretty flat.